Fanfic #1: "The Big Bang"

[*~Melissa~*]

The Big Bang

Written by: mcgrawpaisley


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Cast of Characters
Mike-James Denton
Chely-Chely Wright
Brad-Brad Paisley
Dusty-Grayson Mccouch
Speedy-Calvin Wilburn
Tommy-Tommy
Ricky-Ricky Ullman
Mark-Mark Collier
Faith-Faith Hill
Tim-Tim Mcgraw
Lucas-Lucas Black
Jake-Jake Gyllenhall
Jack-Matthew Fox

Recurring Characters
Elliot-Christopher Meloni
Marlena-Deidre Hall
Reva-Kim Zimmer
Josh-Robert Newman
Charlene-Jean Smart
Tony

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St. Marks Church
INT-Hall
Dusty,Mark,Faith and Chely
Chely:I am so happy for my sister Belle today she is getting married
Mark:I cant believe she is Marrying Shawn
Dusty:He is the love of her life though
Faith:Lets go sit down somewhere

INT-Commencery
Tommy,Ricky,Lucas and Jake
Ricky:wow this place looks great
Tommy:Lets go upstairs the wedding is fixing to start
Lucas:Hang on I forgot my glove
Jake:lets go

EXT-A stranger outside and we hear them say The wedding is not going to go smoothly and they walk inside

INT-Santucary
Hope,Doug,Calvin,Mike and Jack
Brad,Tim and Josh
Elliot,Marlena,and Reva

The wedding march begins and then the bride walks down

The Reverand goes over the vows and the tradional sayings

The Stranger gets up and walks out and gets on his motorcycle and starts it up and everyone inside hears the Motorcycle going and they start stand up and look concerned and then The motorcycle comes through the window and everybody is running and covering themselves

TBC

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Replay of Motorcycle crashing through window of Church and everyone screaming

INT-Santucary
Belle is bleeding from the shards of glass and Shawn is knocked out from the Chandlier falling

Hope:OMG Shawn Wake up please come on
Doug:come on Boy U can do it
Calvin:I will call a ambulance
Jack:I have to check on Belle ok

Marlena:Oh Belle sweetie stay w/ us
Tommy:we are losing here come on
John:come on Izzy
Ricky:Dad the ambulance is on the way

Chely:Who drove the motorcycle in here
Brad:lets go find out
Mike:right behind U
Faith:wait for me

Dusty,Mark,Lucas,Jake,and Josh help the other ppl escape by the back door.

The Ambulance Arrives

They Put Belle and Shawn in the Ambulance and drive off

INT-Hallway
Mike:Omg the driver of the motorcycle is not here
Chely:heres the motorcycle but where is he or she
Brad:hes gone
Faith:lets go on to the hospital

Ext-Hideaway
The stranger has pictures of everyone those pics are of Hope,Tommy,Dusty,Chely,Faith and Marlena

TBC


Isabella Belle Black-Martha Madison
Father:John Black
Mother:Marlena Evans
Sister:Chely Black
Brother:Jake Black
Sister:Samantha Black
Brother:Benjy Mackey
Brother:Tommy Stabler
Brother:Luke Ross
Brother:Freddie Dimeria
Brother:Dusty Donovan
Nephew:Jacob Donovan
Nephew:Kyle Mackey
Nephew:Xavier Munson
Niece:Lacey Mackey
Nephew:William Mackey
Aunt:Lexie Carver
Uncle:Pierce Dimeria
Aunt:Blake Marler
Uncle:Scott Baldwin
Cousins:Jason Dimeria
Colin Dimeria
Matt Marler
Kristian Baldwin
Justin Baldwin
Grandfather:Roger Thorpe
Grandmother:Holly Reade
Grandfather:Stefano Dimeria
Grandmother:Daphne Dimeria(Deceased)
Romances:Shawn Brady(Broke Up)
Lucas Stabler(Broke up)
Cam Abbott(Dated)
Marah Lewis(Lovers and friends)

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INT-Hospital Waiting Room
Lucas:I hope Belle is gonna be alright
Reva:Im sure she is sweetie
Elliot:I am here to question everyone so be careful

INT-Hospital Room
Belles Room
Marlena:my sweet girl
John:she is gonna be just fine
Jake:Yeah shes a black
Chely:I heard Elliot has already started the investigation
Ricky:Great I want this person caught
Tommy:I wonder who it is and where they are at

INT-Hospital Room
Shawns Room
Hope:Shawn U are ok U can go see Belle later
Bo:We are investigating it now
Jack:U look fine so U can leave now I can go check on Belle
Calvin:How is Belle
Jack:she is conscious but everything looks great
Alyson:Im here I was at work

EXT-Cabin
The stranger is planning a murder
Stranger:This town will never be the same again

TBC
(Contract)
Lucas Stabler-Lucas Black
Father:Elliot Stabler
Mother-Reva Shayne
Brothers-Tommy Stabler(Paternal half Brother)
Brother:Chris Stabler(Paternal Half brother)
Sister:Brooke Katherine Davis(Paternal Half Sister)
Sister:Victoria Stabler(Paternal Half Sister)
Sister-Marah Lewis(Maternal Half Sister)
Brother:Bradley Delfino(Maternal Half Brother)
Sister:Peyton Sawyer(Maternal Sister)
Brother:Luke Ross(Paternal Half)
Aunt:Cassie Layne(Maternal half Aunt)
Uncle:Rusty Shayne
Uncle:Chris Keller
Cody Keller
Todd Keller
Jesse Keller
Leo Shayne
Ryan Jeremiah
Finn Hudson
Justin Lewis
Grandfather:Hawk Shayne(Maternal Grandfather)
Grandfather:Mac Stabler(Paternal Grandfather)
Grandmother-Sarah Shayne(Maternal Grandmother) Grandmother:Viki Lord Stabler
Past Girlfriends:Carrie Hughes(Broke up)
Belle Black(Broke up)
Lucy Montgomery(Broke Up)
Carrie Hughes(Dating)
Santana Lopez(ONS)
Melissa Newman(Dated)
Finn Hudson(Lover)
Chan Grimadi(Lover)

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INT-Black Cabin
Chely:I am so glad Belle is ok
Jake:Yeah me too I have to meet Grandpa Victor at Titan call U later
Chely:Ok Bye
Ricky:I am going to meet Alyson at the Pub see U later
Chely:Bye then its great to be alone
Ding Dong
Chely:Oh hi Dusty whats going on

INT-Lewis House
Mike:I cant believe this person got away
Elliot:I have a feeling its not over
Tommy:I have the exact same feeling
Lucas:so whats next
Josh:we have to be careful this person is smart
Brad:Thats right we could be next
Tim:I hope we are prepared for what happens

INT-Airport
Belle:Bye Dad I love U and Mom so much I am going on my Honeymoon
Shawn:we love U guys
Hope:we love U too
Marlena:there they go

EXT-Abbott Mansion
Mark is leaving for the airport
Stranger comes up from behind and hits in the back of the head w/ a brick and stabs him in the back
and runs off

Jack:Mark are u ok wake up
Faith:OMG Mark I am calling 911 hurry up
The ambulance arrives and takes Mark away

INT-Black Cabin
Chely:Dusty whats going on
Dusty:I just wanted to say I love U
Chely:Really I love U too
Ring Ring
Dusty:Hello is he ok Im on my way
Chely:what is it
Dusty:mark was attacked at the house and he is at the hospital
Chely:I will come w/ U

INT-Hospital
Jack:Oh Dusty and Chely he was stabbed and hit in the head
Dusty:Im sure he is ok
Chely:I will call Elliot and them
Marlena:Im here is Mark ok
Jack:we dont know
Reva:I hope we is alright

Hospital Room
Jack and Lexie are looking at him
Lexie:I think he is lost him and he is not responding
Jack:I will go tell the family

Waiting Room
Jack:Hi Mr.Spalding I checked on Mark and Im afraid we lost him he has past away.Im very sorry
Dusty and chely embrace
Faith:Mark is not dead he OMG and she starts Bawling
Reva and Marlena hug Jack

TBC


Damien Puckerman-Damien Crosse
Father:Joshiah Puckerman
Mother:Blake Thorpe
Brother:Jackson Avery
Brother:Noah Puckerman
Brother:Deuce Puckerman
Sister:Jade West
Uncle:Scott Baldwin
Aunt:Marlena Evans
Niece:Beth Puckerman(Given up for adoption)
Cousins:Justin Baldwin
Nick Thopre
Kristian Thorpe
Tommy Munson
Benjy Mackey
Belle Black
Joey Jeremiah
Samantha Puckett
Neal Caffney
Grandfather:Roger Thorpe
Grandmother:Holly Norris

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Next Day
Horton House
Maggie,Jack and Dusty remembering Mark
Ross:I remember when Mark was born and he was adorable and I knew he was a Abbott
Flashback
Circa 1971
Jack holding Mark
Jack:what a beatiful baby boy here and Holly U are so beatiful
Vanessa:wow Dinah is going to be excited
Jack:I hope so and Blake will be too and what shall we name him
Vanessa:How about Mark Alan Kasnoff
Jack:I Love it
End Flashback

Maggie:I remember that day U were so happy and I remember when I would take Mark to Tuscany w/ me and he would have so much fun
Flashback
Circa 1977
Tuscany
Maggie:Now Mark,Dusty and Dinah U two stay here and I will be right back
Dinah:yes Grandma
Mark:Lets make Grandma present
Dusty:Like what
Mark:a pictuure
Dusty:Great idea
So they cut up the menus and start glueing them on Paper
Maggie:what have U guys done
Mark:we made U a picture
Maggie:Thats so My menus

Dusty:I remember In high school me and Mark were not close but we took care of each other
Flashback
Circa:1988
Mark:come on Tim we cant do that
Tim:why not it will be fun
Mark:That is distructive
Tim:whatever
Dusty:Mark we can not T.P. PPs yards
Tim:Who invivted U
Dusty:I did do U have a problem w/ that
Mark:no
Tim:I guess I dont

Faith Walks in
Faith:Hi everyone I just had a great memory w/ Mark,Me and Grandpa Mickey
Flashback
Circa 1992
Mickey,Faith and Mark in the kitchen
Mickey:now this is your Grandmas favorite cake
Faith:we know and its going to be the best
Mark:yes and its going to be great
Then we see Faith,Mickey and Mark in a food fight
and flour and stuff flying

Funeral Home
Jack:I cant believe I am burying my son tomrrow
Faith:Hi Ross lets go Bye Mark and I love U
Dusty:me too Mark Bye Man

TBC
Marks Funeral
The Stranger picks their next victim
(Contract)
Faith Spalding -Faith Hill(Contract)
Father:Alan Spalding
Mother:Vanessa Chamberlin
Brother:Eric Spalding
Daughter:Alice Charlene Lewis w/ Tim Lewis
Son:Samuel Alan Lewis w/ Tim
Currently Expecting w/ Dwayne
Aunt:Maureen Chamberlin(Maternal Aunt)
Niece:Abbey Spalding
GrandFather:Brandon Spalding(Paternal Grandfather(Deceased)
Grandfather:Henry Chamberlin(Maternal Grandfather)
Tim Lewis(Divorced)
Dwayne Mackey(Engaged)

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Next Day
Marks Funeral
Memorial Springs Church
Maggie and Mickey Walk in followed by Dusty,Chely,Faith,Jack
Maggie:I cant believe this Mickey
Mickey:Me either lets just pray this goes smoothly
Chely:So how are U doing Dusty
Dusty:Im ok now that U are here
Faith:wow this place looks great
Chely:It really does
In Comes Marlena,John,Ricky,Tommy,Lucas,Josh and Reva
Tommy:Lets sit here
Lucas:Ok but I am going to buy my last respects
Ricky:me too

Reverand Comes Up and says a prayer and then Alan gives a eulogy and Faith and Dusty do the same
then we go outside to the Cemetary

Cemetary
Jack:That was a beatiful Service
Marlena:Yes it was and Holly would be proud
Reva:Yes she would
Jack:Goodbye Mark I Love you

Faith:Bye Mark We Loved U so Much
Dusty:yes we did

After The Service

Police Department
Tommy:Hey Dad U missed Marks Funeral
Elliot:Oh Crap I did not mean too
Tommy:its ok Umm I think I know who the killer is
Elliot:who do u think it is
Tommy:I wish I could give U some evidence to prove it
Elliot:Get me some and I may believe U
Tommy:bye Dad

The Stranger watches Tommy leave the Police station and says Victim No 2 is coming up Bye Bye Tommy

The Blacks Cabin
Chely:man I am tired
Faith:me too I am going to change Clothes
Chely:Ok
Ding Dong Ding Dong
Chely:I will get it OMg it cant be (she opens the door)
Its Chris and Kenny from High School
Chris:Hi Chely how are U
Kenny:Hi Chel
Chely:Hi guys whats going on
Kenny:we came back here to see everyone from High school
Faith:Kenny and Chris its so great to see u

Coffee Shop
Tommy is buying a coffee and bumps into two ppl
Tommy:what are u doing here and how are yall doing
Tony:Great how about U
Tommy:fine so where are U staying
Tommy:How come U did not tell me U two were back
Tony:Surprise
Tommy:alot call me here is my number

Ricky:who is Tommy talking to
Jake:I dont know but lets find out
Lucas:I think I know

TBC

Chely Isabella Black-Chely Wright(Contract)
Father:John Black
Mother:Isabella Toscano(deceased)
Brothers:Jake Black(Full)
Brother:Joey Munson(Maternal Half)
Sister:Belle Black(Paternal Half Sister)
Son:Xavier Harold Munson w/ Donnie Munson
Son:Jonathon Donnie Munson w/ Donnie
Currently expecting w/ Vin
Uncles:Antony Dimera(Paternal Half Uncle)
Uncle:Bo Brady(Maternal Half Uncle
Uncle:Pierce Dimeria(Paternal Uncle)
Uncle:Kevin Kirakis(Maternal Uncle)
Aunts:Lexie Dimera(Paternal Half Aunt)
Cousins:Chris Kirakis
Jason Dimeria
Colin Dimeria
Brian Kirakis
Grandfather:Victor Kirakis(Maternal Grandfather)
Grandfather:Stefano Dimera(Paternal Grandfather)
Grandmother:Daphne Dimera(Paternal Grandmother)(Deceased)
Donnie Munson(Divorced)
Vin Mackey(engaged)

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Coffee Shop
Tommy:so lets find a seat
Tony:I will get the coffee
Lucas:so Bro who are these folks
Tommy:Um Lucas this is Benjy and Tony is buying coffee and guys my brother Lucas
Tommy:my step brothers Jake and Ricky
Ricky:Howdy
Jake:so whats going on
Tommy:Nothing just cathing up
Tony:Ok wanna join us

10 mins later
Tommy:I have to go but Um call me and we will meet again
Tony:see ya

The Mall
Lucas:Howdy man what is it
Tommy:I just wanted to say Im sorry for snapping and you are a great brother and goodbye

Police Station
Tommy:Mom what are U doing here
Marlena:Im helping the police w/ the investigation
Elliot:whats going on
Tommy:I just wanted to say I love U
Marlena:we love U too
Elliot:yeah we both too
Tommy:I am going to Tuscany see U later

Tuscany
Maggie:Hi Tommy whats going on
Tommy:Nothing Grandma just stopped to say Hi and visit
Dusty:Hi Tommy
Tommy:Dusty Great U are here and I wanted to say U are inspirations to me and see U later

Alley Behind Salem Place
Tommy walks in and the stranger strikes and stabs tommy in the stomach and neck and puts him in a very dark spot

mall
Marlena:wow I have been trying to call Tommy
Lucas:me too
Elliot:wait what is that dripping
Maggie:its blood
Then all of a sudden something collapes and Tommys body falls down from the celing

Marlena:NOT MY Baby

TBC

Thomas Dustin Stabler-Tommy ****(Contract)
Father:Elliot Stabler
Mother:Marlena Evans
Sisters:Belle Black(Maternal Half Sister)
Brothers:Lucas Stabler
Brother:Chris Stabler
Brother:Benjy Mackey(Maternal half brother)
Sister:Brooke Davis
Sister:Victoria Stabler
Brother:Luke Ross
Son:Eli Munson w/ Mia(Given up for adoption)
Aunt:Blake Marler(Maternal Aunt)
Uncle:Scott Baldwin
Uncle:Paul Munson
Uncle:Chris Keller
Niece:Lacey Mackey
Nephew:Hal Mackey
Nephew:Jonathon Munson
Nephew:xavier munson
Cousins:Justin Baldwin
Nick Thorpe
Jackson Avery
Damien Puckerman
Noah Puckerman
Deuce Puckerman
Jade West
Neal Caffney
Jesse Keller
Todd Keller
Grandfather:Sam Munson(Paternal Grandfather)(Adopted)
Grandfather:Roger Thrope(Maternal Grandfather)(Deceased)
Grandfather:Mac Stabler(Paternal Grandfather)
Grandmother:Suzanne Sugarbaker Stabler(Paternal Grandmother)
Grandmother:Pam Munson(Paternal Grandmother)(Adopted)
Grandmother:Holly Norris(Maternal Grandmother)
Past Girlfriends:Scarlett Hughes(Broke up)
Lucy Montgomery(Broke up)
Mia Toretto(Broke up)
Regina George(Dated)
Quinn Fabray(1 date)
Santana Lopez(2 time lover)
Christina Berry(Dated)
Noah Puckerman(lover)
Cam Abbott(Lover)

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Replay of Tommys body falling from the ceiling all bloody
Marlena:NOT MY BABY
Elliot:TOMMY what happened
Lucas:he cant be dead he cant
Dusty:I called 911 they are on the way.This killer is gonna pay for killing my brother and my cousin

Ambulance arrives and takes Tommy to the morgue

Next Day
Funeral Home
Marlena:Tommy died at the hands of some serial killer
Elliot:come on Marlena U cant blame yourself
Marlena:I remember when I delievered him
Flashback
Circa 1982
Marlena:OMG he is so beatiful and Elliot look at our son
Elliot:Yeah five fingers and five toes
Marlena:what can we name him
Dusty:Hi everyone how is cousin
Elliot:Great
Dusty:Aunt Marlena have U thought of a name yet
Marlena:I am going to name him Thomas Dustin Stabler for My Grandpa Tom and U Dusty for helping me
Dusty:it was no big deal
Elliot:welcome to the family
End Flashback

Maggie and Mickey remembering good times
Mickey:I remember when he was about 5 and we bought him that tricycle plus HB helped out
Flashback
Circa 87
Mickey:here U go Tommy a tricycle now Grandpa will be right behind U
H.B.:Look at Our Grandson he is getting so big
Maggie:wow look at him go is there more precious site
H.B.:Nope I have to go see my other Grandkids bye
End Flashback

Lucas is also thinking of good times
Flashback
Circa 1999
Lucas:come on Tommy lets go
Tommy:Nah go ahead I will be there later
Lucas:Just be careful
Tommy:all we have is each other
Lucas:Thats right the Stabler Boys
Tommy:The Stabler boys
End Flashback

Dusty,Josh and Mike having Flashbacks
Flashback
Circa 2003
Tommy:Hi Dusty U and me lets go have some fun
Dusty:like what
Tommy:how about Horseback riding
Dusty:Great lets go
Josh:Now Guys be careful and dont go pass the trail
Tommy:we wont Uncle Josh
Mike:now Tommy and Dusty put the horses back when U are done
Dusty:we willEnd Flashback

TBC
Next Day Funeral
the 3rd Victim is coming up


Joey Jeremiah-Pat Mastronni
Mother:Marlena Evans
Brother:Benjy Mackey(Maternal Half)
Brother:Tommy Stabler(Maternal Half)
Brother:Jacob Jeremiah(Paternal Half)
Sister:Belle Black(Maternal Half)
Daughter:Angelna Jeremiah
Son:Joseph Patrick Jeremiah
Uncle:Scott Baldwin
Aunt:Blake Thorpe
Nephew:
Hal Mackey
Eli Munson(Given up for adoption)
Ryan Jeremiah
Niece:Lacey Mackey
Cousin:Kristian Thorpe
Nick Thorpe
Justin Baldwin
Damien Puckerman
Noah Puckerman
Deuce Puckerman
Jade West
Neal Caffney
Grandfather:Roger Thorpe
Grandmother:Holly Norris
Catlian Ryan(Divorced)
Hope Williams(Dating)

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Next Day
St. Damiens Church
Alan,Vanessa,Faith,Tim,Brad and Ricky(Back Row)
Josh,Dusty,Calvin,Chely,Hope and Jack(Front them)
Maggie,Mickey,Doug,Alice,Jake and H.B,Mike
Marlena,John,Lucas,Elliot,Benjy and Tony

Reverand:we are gathered here to Mourn the passing of Thomas Dustin Stabler

Marlena and Elliot read a poem, Lucas tells a story, and Josh,Mike and Dusty read letters

Cemetary
Lucas:Bye Man I love U
Elliot:Bye Son
Marlena:My little man
Dusty:I am going to miss U

Stabler House
Backyard
Marlena:Hi Caroline thanks for coming
Caroline:No problem wheres Calvin I need to talk to him
Marlena:I dont know maybe inside
Caroline:Thanks so much and sorry for your lose

Kitchen
Dusty:whoever killed my Brother and my cousin is gonna pay big time
Chely:calm down Dusty ok
Dusty:I will calm down
Faith:I dont think the murders are over someone will be
next
Tim:I agree and I believe the next victim will be a woman
Chely:This is getting creepy

Living Room
Ricky:I wonder if Tommy knew who the killer was
Lucas:I think he did
Alyson:excuse me I need to use the faculities

Hallway
Alyson:OMG I know who the killer is and I have to tell Uncle Roman and Dad

Stranger watching Alyson U
Stranger:U are next miss Brady

TBC


Quinn Faraby-Dianna Agron
Father:Jacob Jeremiah
Brother:Ryan Jeremiah
Daughter:Beth Puckerman(Given up for adoption)
Boyfriends:Finn Hudson(Dating)
Noah Puckerman(Broke up)
Tommy Stabler Munson(1 date)

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3 Days Later
Mall
Chely:so Dusty can we sit down and talk
Dusty:sure what do U wanna talk about
Chely:I am going on a business trip w/ Faith and another girl we will be gone a week
Dusty:Great it would be good for U to get out of this town
Chely:I know well I better go pack

Coffee Shop
Kenny:Can I have a medium decaf please thanks
Faith:Hi Kenny whats going on
Kenny:Im good I heard you are leaving town
Faith:Yeah for a week but I will be back for the reunion
Kenny:Great I have to go for a meeting so call me
Faith:Ok Bye

Spalding Enterprises
Faith:ok Sara are U packed to go
Sara:Yeah I am packed and ready
Faith:Ok lets go meet Chely at the airport
Sara:right behind U

Airport
Dusty:Chely I need to ask you something
Chely:what is it
Dusty:will U marry me
Chely:Why yes I will marry U
Faith:Congrats we overheard
Chely:Bye everyone be careful

Brady PUB
we see a gloved hand put something inside tea and walk away
Alyson:Grandma is this my tea
She is about to drink

TBC

Kimberly Ann Hart-Amy Jo Johnson
Father:Rick Hart
Mother:Chris Higgins
Sister:Tina Sheperd Hart
Nephew:Kevin Thorpe
Boyfriends:Jason Scott(Broke up)
Tommy Oliver(Broke up)
Jason Scott(Dating)

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Replay of Alyson drinking the tea
Alyson:This tea tastes funny
Then she collapses

Caroline:Oh my Goodness Alyson sweetheart can U hear me Alyson someone call 911
Hope:OMG not my child not my baby
Coroner:This person has passed Im sorry Mame
Hope:NO NO it cant be im dreaming
Bo:Sit down here
Victor:now this person is gonna pay

Rose Kane-Betty White
Daughter:Erica Kane
GranddaughterThe Stranger is watching and we see their back and they are laughing

Brady Pub
Alysons Wake
Doug:I called Shawn he cant make it down the weather is too bad
Julie:Our Grandchild is gone whats next
Victor:I wish I knew
Caroline:me too

Backroom
Hope:I remember when I brought Alyson home shawn was so jealous
Flashback
Circa 1989
Hope:here we go now Shawn meet your sister Alyson Brady
Shawn:No shes ugly
Hope:Shawn come on now be sweet
Shawn:No
Bo:come on shes your sister
Shawn:No but I still love her
End Flashback

Hope:I wish he could be here
Bo:me too but the weather is rough there
Hope:I can imagine

Booth
Ricky,Jake,and Lucas
Lucas:man now Alyson is dead we need to figure out who the killer is
Jake:Yeah we do before there is another victim
Ricky:First there was mike Stabbed and bludeoned,Then Tommy stabbed and stuffed and now Alyson poisned what could be next.Excuse me I need to say something to Dad

Bar
Tony:Yeah but we need evidence
Elliot:do U really wanna help
Tony:we will do anything
Elliot:Great come on

Outside the PUB
Dusty:Dad have fun in New York see U soon bye
Then someone taps Dustys shoulder
Dusty:whos there
Vanessa:hi sweetheart how are U
Dusty:mom its so good to see U since Mark is dead,Faith and chely on that trip and Dad vacationing
Vanessa:Good I brought Quint w/ me he is at the cottage
Dusty:Great

TBC
Alysons Funeral
The Fourth victim is found and
Stranger revealed to audience


Tim Lewis-Tim Mcgraw
Father:Josh Lewis
Mother:Reva Shayne
Sister:Marah Lewis(Paternal Half)
Brother:Lucas Stabler(Materner Half)
Brother:Bradley Delfino(Maternal Half)
Sister:Peyton Sawyer(Maternal Half)
Brother:Stephen Lewis
Daughter:Caroline Alice Lewis w/ Faith
Son:Samuel Joshua Lewis w/ Faith
Uncle:Billy Lewis
Uncle:Rusty Shayne
Aunt:Cassie Layne
Cousins:Mindy Lewis
Bill Lewis
Finn Hudson
Ryan Shayne
Ryan Jeremiah
Justin Lewis
Grandfather:HB Lewis
Grandmother:Martha Lewis
Grandfather:Hawk Shayne
Grandmother:Sarah Shayne
Faith Spalding(Divorced)

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Next Day
Church
Jake,Lucas,Reva,John,Marlena and Josh-Back row
Ricky,Vanessa,Quint,Dusty,Calvin and Jack-3rd Row
Julie,Doug,Victor,Caroline,Shawn Sr and Maggie
Bo and Hope

The service begins and they saw a prayer and walk out to cemetary to bury Alyson

Cemetary
Hope:My little girl my only girl is dead because of this monster
Bo:I know sweetheart Elliot and the rest are working on it
Hope:They better hurry or I will kill this person my self

Caroline:I wonder who is next or is it over
Victor:Its not over someone else will die
Caroline:Lord save us all

Jake:I miss her already man
Lucas:me too wheres Ricky at
Jake:He must be still inside

Police Station
Elliot:Can U two can us your full names
Benjy:Yeah Benjy Thad Brewer
Tony:Anthony Jacob Langford
Elliot:Thanks how did U know my son
Benjy:he was a volunteer at the prison we stayed
Elliot:Really good deal lets look at the evidence we have

Victim No 1:Mark Spalding-He was Stabbed and Bludonged
Victim No 2:Tommy Stabler-He Was Stabbed and put in a pinata
Victim No 3:Alyson Brady-She was Poisned

Tony:so the killer picks the ones who know about him and then murders them

Salem Airport
Chely,Faith and Sara return
Chely:man I am ready to get home
Faith:me too see yall later
Sara:call me ok
Chely:we will

Black Cabin
Chely:Let me call Dad and let him know im home
Phone Call
Chely:Hi Dad im home whats going on
John:Alyson Brady was murdered
Chely:No by who
John:we dont know so be careful
Chely:I will hang on Dad bad reception
John:hello Hello

Chely:I know who the murderer is and I cant believe it
Stranger:Bye Bye Chely I guess you are No 4
Chely:No wait
We look and it is RICKY
Ricky:Bye Sis I love U
And He shoots her
Chely:Nooooooooo
She dies

Ricky slips out and runs out the back

At the front door Dusty,John,and Tony run in
Dusty:OMG Chel No U cant die on me
John:not my little girl
Tony:I have to call the police now

Woods
Ricky:Now no one will know that I murdered Alyson,Mark,Tommy and now Chely

[
TBC
Ricky almost gets caught
Chely is mourned


Rachel Berry-Lea Michele
Sister:Catlian Ryan
Niece:Angenla Jeremiah
Nephew:Joseph Jeremiah
Cousins:Mia Toretto
Christina Williams
Boyfriend:Finn Hudson(Broke up)
Noah Puckerman(Dating)
Tommy Munson(Made Out)

[mcgrawpaisley]

In the woods
Ricky:whew I cant believe I killed my sister and step brother and some good friends too
Reva is also walking through the woods
Reva:OMG what is Ricky doing here let me call Charlene
Ricky:No dont I just tried and didnt get anything
Reva:whats going on here
Ricky:Umm I just heard Chely came home and I was going to visit her
Reva:and U must have just left
Ricky:Yeah
Reva:Im sorry I have to go




Black Cabin
Elliot:Ok all you reporters out of here
Mike:I will help U man

Brad:I cant believe Chelys Dead Tim
Tim:I know come on lets get over here
Dusty:I loved her and we were engaged
Calvin:Ok my brother is here I will tell him what happened

Jack:so wheres John
Calvin:he is calling Jake,Belle,and Ricky now
Jack:Ok 4 murders have gone down whats going on here
Calvin:I dont know

Jake walks in w/ Lucas and Ricky
Lucas:Great theres Dad Im going over there
Ricky:Hey Dad we are going to miss her
Jake:Yeah we will

Brad:I loved her more than anything
Tim:I know lets go Outside
Josh:Hey Fellas lets go home

Calvin:Chel was my world and now shes gone
Jack:Im sorry man I wish I could help
Hope:Im sorry speedy

Dusty:Man my fiancee is gone who else is the stranger gonna take away next
Faith:Hi Bro im here
Dusty:Thanks sis

Mike:Man Elliot I was in love w/ chely
Elliot:U were what happened
Mike:Brad walked in

We close in on John,Jake,and Ricky hugging and then we see Rickys mind flashing to:
Hitting mark w/ the brick
Stabbing Tommy
Poisioning Alyson
Shooting Chelyand then we see him smile

TBC
Chelys Funeral
Ricky strikes again
Tony leaves


Elliot Stabler-Christopher Meloni
Father:Mac Stabler
Brother:Chris Keller(Paternal Half)
Son:Christopher Stabler(Adopted)
Son:Thomas Stabler(Adopted)
Son:Lucas Stabler
Daughter:Brooke Davis
Daughter:Victoria Stabler
Nephew:
Benjy Mackey
Vin Mackey
Todd Keller
Jesse Keller
Grandson:Eli Munson(Given up for adoption)
Marriages:Erica Kane(Engaged and Broke up)
Marlena Evans(ONS)
Reva Shayne(Divorced)
Olivia Hughes(Married)